"Ravages of being solitary"

A depressive soul walks in,all alone,for whom merriment was cremated. Blossoms of cheer fell in no man's land for him. Being bold,he survives the dejection. But the question is,"For how long"?

"Being solitary is a depressive trend,
that i was to evade from a small errand.
The autumn had already set in,
thought,"it won't throw me to a bin".

"I got the chirping of a sparrow,
that rejuvenated me for the time being very narrow.
But melancholy spread in the air,
as everything ends up in despair."

"I got the glimpse of a family on a car,
that made me feel behind the bars.
I couldn't get when i took my last breath.
just weeping in regrets,left before my death."

Reviews

[Mathew Tittle]

Excellent piece of poetry. It is written elegantly while keeping a darker tune of emotion.

[sushobhan]

Thanks to pay your visit. I am satiated that it impressed ya'.

[Coyote Poetry]

"I got the chirping of a sparrow,
that rejuvenated me for the time being very narrow.
But melancholy spread in the air,
as everything ends up in despair."
The above lines are amazing. Easy to fall into solitary places. Hard to escape them. The strong description brought to life the emotion and the loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sushobhan]

Thanks for the matter of fact that you were so painstaking to get through my poem. Nice compliments...You're an amazing sensation yourself.

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great job here... I really enjoyed reading it... Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read what's next from you... Thanks for sharing...

[sushobhan]

Thanks for your,"Poetic evoking". I will also scatter my best wishes to your poetic era.