crippled in being dormant

A Poem by sushobhan

in this composition,a straight edge kickoff towards the halloween gets emphasized.Cruise on,as the nerves get blocked,and feel the wrath of a dream that renovates goosebumps on a guy.

After a cumbersome day,
i didn't knew my way.
Got off straight to bed,
and murmured how i lost my bet.

In no moment,i was in the corner of my dreams.
Residing just in front of a mall,
i just got a call,
that today was your downfall.

"what the dickens?",i exclaimed.
as modernity was the word i claimed.
I headed straight for cappucinno,
that was summoned by peculiar sort of winnow.

As i dashed for my stuff,
i found the waiter in handcuffs
An ecstasy rose to launch his mockery,
followed by breakage of the crockery.

A word to apology i meant,
as the next moment i got my senses to rent.
Dripped in blood and devoid of any head,
stood an apparition that was to get my body shred.

Blasted in fury of speed,i absconded,
resembling the "Bolt of the Gauntlet".
I found myself to be forlorn,
and mused of the misery that i was born.

i got off to the electronics section.
to meet one more profession in making dejection.
A corpse with a rusty dagger and head in hand
was to make my soul a brand.

Once again,i somehow evaded, to washroom,
but only to call the bull to set my doom.
On the cracked mirror i found a text very blurred,
not with ink but with blood.

"Your doomsday is all set to be in eternity,
the spectre in armor is to make it reality.
Escape through the abaddonial passage.
or get buried in the casket.

I set my journey again,
to get a phantom to engender refrain,
that asks,"join me for some momos".
To which i replied,"No-No".

I met my way to paradise,
that was blocked by a skull in disguise.
This gesture got my bravery on the nerves
as it's "a*s-kicking" would get me what i deserved.

With one awesome blow,
got the skull to forget it's scarlet glow.
As i woke up,i found a scratch on my fellow's arm,
that whipped me like the bull at a barn.

© 2013 sushobhan

Author's Note

Comment anything as a successful personality is the one who lays a firm foundation out of the bricks one throws at him.

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dw817

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You mentioned this one to me in a Private Message.
Can I say it's a real brainweave ! :D
One thing I noticed is starting on the 3rd paragraph it rhymes perfectly. The 1st and 2nd however, do not, which kinna breaks up the continuity. It might be possible to change. If you need help, PM me again and I'll give you some words that would meet and rhyme there.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Mia

I thought either drugs where involved or there is a need to rush to remember all the details of the dream. Very disjointed and sometimes, I felt like there were parts I wasn’t meant to understand. If I am right and you did that on purpose then I must commend you. This was a very interesting read!

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

No drugs.I have experienced this and it makes me feel the goosebumps even now.But anyway,thanks for .. read more

Sami Khalil

"Your doomsday is all set to be in eternity,
the spectre in armor is to make it reality.
Escape through the abaddonial passage,[abaddonial means hellish.Not English]
or get buried in the casket.

A splendid read and write....Thank you for sharing...:)