The rain of memories....

The splashes of the rain
touches my face and brings a smile...

I want a house with-out a roof
where I could live with your drizzles and cyclones...

He keeps hitting my window trying to break it to reach me,
I pity myself to have lost the time to live for my likes...

The sounds of the glass breaking stopped,
now i know you are no more waiting for me,
When i opened the doors, you where gone
the soft heart cried within me,
I lost you just to keep the others happy
to leave me hurt and crying...

The rain is gone, the new rainbow is here,
Rainbow is beautiful yet it can never replace him...
I would want to fill my room with the fragrance of the moist
and live in his memories for ever....

Reviews

[SAYED THANGAL]

highly powerful and deep, good one, enjoyed the poem

[Acer]

The sounds of the glass breaking stopped,
now i know you are no more waiting for me,
When i opened the doors, you where gone
the soft heart cried within me,
I lost you just to keep the others happy
to leave me hurt and crying...

...........Just ripped out my heart indeed. lovely write. I think you know the worth of writing very well. Your words are very powerful, so dominant indeed. loved to read out really.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

the hope is the warrior of will....Lightning the darkest grave....... I love the thought process in this poem....very well written :-)

[Whiskurz]

Such a beautifully written piece.....Whisk