Touch Wood

I forgot the thought of looking at the clock,
all day, all night the time spent remains as fragrant
spreading every seconds of my life...

The days are beautiful,
The heart feels contend,
My life looks complete...

Every where around me,
I see unhappy couples
fighting often and break-ups.

I look at them and turn to you
You are the one, I never wanna miss,
with you, a hundred years i dream for...

I feel we are unique from the crowd around,
we are the one for each other,
the more I think of this, I get scared...

Sweetheart, let the evil remain uninformed,
lets keep some fights in our love story like in rest
which we don't really mean...

I don't want the evil to cast his eye,
I want all my good dreams to come true,
Touch Wood...

Reviews

[DiMar4u]

feels like i've been here before. strange, though it ended, i haven't lost the moment, and, you have reminded me of it. to fall deeply, swallowed in the folds, it is true freedom to believe again..i am entirely certain that i will, someday. thank you for sharing. great read.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice loving write. I like this part:

"Every where around me,
I see unhappy couples
fighting often and break-ups.

I look at them and turn to you
You are the one, I never wanna miss,
with you, a hundred years i dream for..."

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh so very cute! Very touching Sushi! Especially the last stanza. Nearly brought tears to my eyes. I loved this one so much. It goes into my library. Thank you :)

[Pradnya]

hey nice cute poem

[Lively]

Niceeeeeee

[Chris]

The tastes of live as we wish it... yet seldom get to live it.

[Victoria Scott]

I loved it! It was very special and well written :D

[JoyMarieGold]

Wow how beautiful. It touched my heart especially how you related evil in.

[Sweets]

This is beautiful :)

[Groovy]

Beautiful with excellent imagery, thought-provoking.