YOU and I

Two birds were born,

in a nest at great banyan tree.

 

The two played together,

sang together and

promised to stay together forever.

 

New birds flocked to their tree,

friends circle got formed.

They started to part at husk

and came back at dawn.

 

The leaves fell down at autumn

and new one grew with spring.

The wings of twins grew stronger.

One flew away to a tree at far,

the other stayed at the same tree

looking at the other smiling.

 

The rain ended and winter came,

both the birds lived happily at their tree,

rarely remembering their siblings

busy with their life and family.

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing and so meaningful. Ur title also attractive. I like ur whole wording. Keep it up!

[Chris]

This left thoughts roiling around...

[Abhishek Ramkissoon]

nice concept, beautifully delivered in words..
loved the warm feeling which felt through the poem..read it thrice and really liked it
great piece or writing

reminds us to cherish all the moments we're living with our loved ones in the present..no matter what sometimes parting of ways is all but natural..