Dreamy Girl

When its' harder to speak,
let the silence remain,
let the suspense grow.

You be besides me,
I will close my eyes
and feel your presence.
You conclude I am asleep,
and I will pour my heart's content
as if talking in sleep.

Reviews

[Pradnya]

good nice one

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good work..!!!

[Sakib]

Nice write. Love the depth in writing.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh!Lovely Sushi!!That is so..deep and refreshing to read!Loved it!Thank you :)

[lovepoet]

Lovely!
So visual that it was like watching a video
Two people, so close, yet so far apart, inhabiting two separate worlds
I enjoyed your word-feast!

[sushi]

After writing "Sacrificed on belief", i get scared to see my write crossing half of the page. Lol........

Now a days im trying hard to write short and sweet poems... Im Happy that you all enjoyed it...

Thanks for the review and encouragement...

[Lively]

Very lovely and beautiful poem. You should add more in it. It has the potential to attract readers.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost begs to be read more and more, well done

[Emily]

I agree with Devil's Angel,it's nice, but incomplete.

[Judas Hammer]

LOL simple but nice!!!!