The Love-holic

I wasn't alone before,
My hands were always held by your's.
My eyes were filled with tears
when these hands were empty,
You had concluded,
you never wanted to held them back.

You are still around,
I could see you far...
Maybe, tears do fall from your eyes,
But how will I know?
All I could see is your happiness
always surrounded by friends.

I can't take it any more...
You turn towards me
still never noticing me
I will keep drinking more
till my vision gets blur so much
that I just see you and all other disappear.

Reviews

[everything inbetween]

Great job! It's a great poem and it's heart touching truthfully. It shows that, heartbreak hurts. And some people just act like they don't care after relationships, but you never know it they do. Love it~!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Priyanka Natesh]

That's a very moving piece..Great job.

[Lively]

Very touching. Very well written.
I will keep drinking more
till my vision gets blur so much
that I just see you and all other disappear.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sad and sweet a the same time, well done, good read

[Aurora Lynn]

A very sad poem. I can feel the sadness that the speaker was feeling. The only thing that I would suggest is to fix this little thing 'May be' should be 'Maybe'. Other than that I really enjoyed this poem. Well done!

~Aurora