Towards the success

Towards the success

A Poem by sushi

Every time a wave touches the shore
I see it provoked at its success.

The plumpy wave sprung on the shore;
hugged with joy its dream,destination
after the toil over the oceans, in search as these.

I grew envious at this pygmy's success.
Sitting safe on sand dunes
away from water, under the tree with dreams.

Add me as a node in the list of your waves
and let me try my prodigy luck
to touch the shore --
where lies the fruit of my endless toil.

© 2011 sushi


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i would like to read the poem you said. Can i find it online? Can you help me with that?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome. Have you ever read Mahadevi verma's "Mahur madhur mere deepak jal"?
Its 3rd stanza very much match the theme of your poem. But that poem was spiritual.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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