Search Continues...

The sun has taken the day off...

Still she is standing at the door,
beautifully dressed,
neatly tied hair
bindi on her forehead,
bangles and anklet in deep silence.

The dark shiny crystal floating in tears,
confined to the eye to a border of kajal line
Searching for the arrival of her love.

Many sun had set,
Many months got spent,
in search of the love
that could fill happiness in her eyes.

The endless search continues...
tearing the dates of calendar for an endless time.

Awards

Silver [poetic Olympics]

Apr 13, 2011

• Poetic Olympics #1
• Search Continues...

Reviews

[Lively]

Lovely and true for indian women.

[Nikhil Sharda]

Many sun had set,
Many months got spent,
in search of the love
that could fill happiness in her eyes.

I love this para. It kinda captures the essense of the entire poetry. But abrupty ends

[Aurora Lynn]

A good write! You write with a poetic language that is hard to find these days, which is a good thing. My favorite line is this:

"The sun has taken the day off..."

I don't know why, but it really touched me. Thank you for writing.

[BloodyRabbit]

beautiful poem :)

[LoopyLoo]

Well done. Another Great Day. :-)

[Audrey Howitt]

Really liked this one Sushi! Flows so well and just seems so right in its metaphor and imagery. Well done!!

[Linear]

And so the eternal search must continue, for that one, that special one, the one who will take her heart, lovingly carress it yet set it free, a pure love a chaste love and a much needed love.....A beautiful poem , thank you :O]

[Shalini Dinesh]

Hope her love returns back before her soul parts.... good poem

[Dream Weaver]

The search will always continue
when the sun takes the day off :)
I'm kidding, but this is a wonderful
piece of poetic passion etched
beautifully.