Insearch of a conclusion

The moon from the fairy tale I heard is here
Fair but far from reach
spreading light - bright but cool

The song she sings - a melody from heart
To it I try to add lyrics from languages known
still, the mystery of the song goes unsolved;
With a voice of both pain and happiness
she sings a song with a magic lightening the stars


In an attempt to solve the mystery
I have been awake all night
All the funny moments we lived
all the happiness we shared
had I ever known our destiny vary
would have then itself known, how precious they were

Last I saw you
running away in a hurry
red with tears of blood
no word, never turned back.
I now realize
how much precious the last good bye are

I want to learn to bit a farewell;
decent and true
For, the conversation we had
seem to be incomplete
without a farewell speech
that would help move on
with a season to forgive and forget...

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You write of it so expressively, the way a lunar eclipse serves as a trigger for memories with no closure that occasionally haunt you at every thought they plant in your head. Except, this isn't the usual haunting and kicking and screaming, it's the gentle haunting that exhausts you so with thoughts of where the other has gone after departing from you without a word.
Well expressed.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

You have penned it so well :-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An expressive and thoughtful piece that looks to those to complete thought, well done, good read

[Prem]

Moon is the best romantic subject that a poet could always use to relate with. Now you proved that !!! The words you used and the Picture you choose, everything is perfect. I enjoyed it !!!

[Ankit Kumar]

A fine work expressed precisely yet descriptively...you combine clever conception and facetious expression that the reader himself gives while reading...and that can only happen when a reader connects with written work :)

[Ayvid N]

A very hauntingly beautiful write. It takes the reader to the realization of the changing seasons of love. Very well written Sushi.

[kublakhan27]

Wow, you did an awesome job at working in that blood moon metaphor...in fact I didn't even pick up on it till I got to the end. I liked the first line very much...I knew the table was being set for a piece of introspection and metaphor. There's something about the moon in its many forms and shapes that just seems to demand reminiscence from whoever looks it in the eye. This was a thought-provoking piece that I loved very much...well done sushi :)

[sushi]

Thanks for the wonderful comment 😊