Take Me ~

Take Me!

Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!

Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!

Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

Author's Note

STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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Reviews

[Leo]

Interesting short piece..engaging and romantic..very nice

[Susan 🦋]

Well thank you for reading! Much appreciated. :-)

[poetgurl]

This is such a lovely write, i enjoyed the end. Nicely presented, love the format as well

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you kindly :-)

[poetgurl]

not a problem

[Einstein Noodle]

lovely ... nice bit of humor in closing! "Quick! Close the door, ..." indeed :) pic is also very inspiring of a deeper affection and the added passions within Bad Bunny's form makes for a delightful, fanciful romance ..
E.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Fun little write! Thanks for stopping by.

[Tate Morgan]

found dreams forming prayers answered

[Susan 🦋]

Hello Tate!!! :-) Thanks for stopping by.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is lovely.
I could feel the melody in my head, stuck on replay as I read the poem over and over again.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you for the sweet review!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

My pleasure...

[Karmee]

WOW!! This is so very good and I enjoyed the form. Nicely done

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!! :-)

[Crosby Idasa]

Nice poem... I got the message from you

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

[M.E.Lyle]

Listen here young lady, you have to stop all this writing about passion and love and noises, and other stuff. It's not good for old folks like myself. It's bad on our hearts. At my age I can only dream of such things. I'll probably die in my sleep. I think my heart stopped the other night.
On the serious side, Bad Bunny is pretty cool, and you used it well.
Your words stirred the pot of passion.
A wonderful write.
Well, now it's off to see the cardiologist.

[Susan 🦋]

First off, you get a smile for calling me a 'young lady" :-))) As far as too old?? Nawwww, and dreams can be quite wonderful. I'll explain to your Cardiologist if need be;-)... as far as the love poetry ?? hmmm lol I have an impossible heart ;-) My entire profile page is filled with it.

[Susan 🦋]

.... Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it.

[kitty]

anxiously we wait for passion and love to take charge of our heart body and soul! Love takes charge! Your words takes your readers there Short, sweet direct. Full of passion.

[Rye]

This is such a wonderful beautiful write. Very lovely