Midnight Love's Foray

 

Come love, take my hand tonight, 

hold me now ’til morn's first light … 

soothes our weary day ~ love’s fragrant bouquet.  

 

Mated lips quench growing thirsts,  

interludes sweetly immersed … 

joined rhythmic ballet ~ stroking cares away.  

 

Sheer oneness in utter bliss, 

we can't join closer than this ...   

whispered breaths portray, sighs urge thighs a’splay.  

 

Heavenly union ~ we’re one; 

in comparing us, there’s none. 

Shun all gainsay … true love’s ne'er passé. 

 

Velvet touch, traced hinder-most,  

each lush sensation’s engrossed ...  

warm passions gain sway ~ midnight love’s foray

Author's Note

Ricalai (Rik-uh-lay) An original form created by Richard W. Jenkins. Thank you Richard for teaching me this wonderful poetic form and allowing me to give it a try. :-) Thank you for all the encouragement and continued support. Thank you for being you!

Reviews

[Bare Trees]

I find it so hard to write a sensual poem without becoming somewhat graphic. You weave it in effortlessly and make it just as salacious and yet romantic.

An awesome read.

[Susan 🦋]

Yes, and that's the challenge I enjoy...I rather convey a feeling rather than get hung up on somewhat more 'colorful" words :-) thanks for reading and for another wonderful review! I truly do appreciate you taking the time to express your thoughts of my writings. :-)

[Bare Trees]

It's a pleasure.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Eloquent, elegant and sensual all in one night of love Susan, is quite an achievement. Lovely, silky and poetic to a tee. Richard is turning out many disciples lol!

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for reading and for this review! Yes, Richard is an amazing teacher and I appreciate learning these differnet forms. :-)