You Are Mine!

Free verse

You are mine!

Beauty …
comes when I rest,
the moment
I close my eyes.

Each breath taken, 
softly releasing … 
sweet whispers
of a sigh. 

While pleasing visions
meander through the
flowing meadows
of your love,
I lie upon
a billowed bed, 
warmed by mem'ries
of your touch.

Anticipation soars
into flight, 
longings lend
to desire …
like dreamers
wishing beneath stars, 
your passions
fuel my fire.

Oh,
in this moment,
rises such beauty,
when you float across
my mind;

sweet whispers
of a sigh,
knowing …

You are mine! 

Author's Note

My very first free Verse poetry. Thank you to Richard W. Jenkins for you continued support and encouragement! A very gifted poetic and very patient teacher! :-)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a first poem? hard to believe....as with good free verse, even if there is no rhyme, there is a rhythm...and you exhibit that here. There is such beauty in loving another...in knowing that person is yours to love and loves you back.
very romantic piece.
j.

[Chris]

I like the wistfulness. The softness of the tones draw a dreamer in, and so many like to dream.

[Susan 🦋]

Ha Chris! You found my very first Free Verse! We all like to dream :-) thanks for the review!

[Chris]

Was a re-read and just as good as the first view.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) yes, it's oozing yummy deliciousness lol.but thats ok.

[lakki]

You made me feel the beauty of your poem, and that is the soul purpose of poetry, right? The level of beauty shifted smoothly from one verse to another. Love the experience of reading it.

[Susan 🦋]

awethank you so much!!!

[David-Tyler]

I love this! It flowed so well, each line kept me coming back for more.

[Susan 🦋]

Hey you! Thanks for the sweet review! :-)

[Ghost]

Such a nice soft write of passion.. And nice way to tell your lover that you dream of them holding you and making love to them... Thanks for sharing the sweet write with us..

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thanks for reading! I do appreciate it!

[wordman]

and you did a beautiful job on it,sweet memories

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Chris]

Echoes of remembrance and a mind pic of romance.

[Susan 🦋]

First free verse :-) Thank you for reading and reviewing for me this morning! I'm smiling! :-)

[Chris]

You earned the smile...

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous and mesmerizing to read and appreciate. Glad to stumble upon.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you dear Sami! I'm smiling here :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Me thinks you have a knack for the romantic as you once more fill to flowing a page full of blissful love spoken in words.

[Susan 🦋]

Such are the dreamers that look to the stars and wising :-) Thank you for yet another wonderful review! very much appreciated!

[Sammi]

Oh oh oh Susan your words dance so softly above the page as if they are floating into my being glowing light and tenderness into my heart, no one makes me forget everything but you it's like a magic spell has come over my senses and I am frozen in time with your poetry --- this is far beyond any words I have to describe how amazing I think you are - you must be very very filled with love for your man to have these kind of feelings, and for our teacher Richard he has taught you wonderfully … thank you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Sammi! thank you again for such an amazing revie! I'm at ork smiling. Yes, Richard is a very kind and patient teacher... and maybe a bit stubborn too lol I did NOT want to write free verse. He won :-) Thanks again for the kind words. ( I owe YOU some reviews!!)

[Sammi]

I just love reading your wonderfully perfect poetry Susan; I can imagine you are Richard's favorite student the way you write he must be very very proud of you.
I will love your reviews to my little poems -- you are welcome and thank you too dear Susan! :D

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Sammi]

How happy I am Richard won lol! :)))

[Sammi]

OMG what a heavenly beautiful picture Susan dear!!!

[Sammi]

'Stubborn' haha I think he was smart enough to see how wonderful your free verse poetry will be and how very right he is, your pen is magic free verse wand like no one else -- give us more of you dear Susan! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Susan 🦋]

Sammi! Ya got me smiling again.