Simply You...

love poem

With darkness of night

Brings purest delight

Pleasures to soothe the weary soul

Affixed in your love

No longer, void of...

The gentle warmth to keep me whole.

Gazing eyes; you rest...

Desires now behest

Your form coaxing me to caress

The feel of your skin

While breathing you in

Allowing my love to express.

Sail my fingers through

Your hair, all askew

This thrilling sensation in me

A kiss on sweet lips

The arch of your hips

Lover's physique, seducing thee

Those breathless whispers

My body quivers

No longer willing to contain

I reach for your hand...

You cannot withstand

Passions escape their binding chain.

This fire flares within

Burning now, has been...

Anticipating only you

Every need fulfilled

(knowing you are skilled)

Your love, I shall always pursue.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Oh dearest Susan, how I love poems of love and this one is written so so well..
I see you wrote it 5 years ago so I feel lucky to have found it...
Did you read my last review of yours with my quick question?
Lisa

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Lisa, thank you for taking a look at this one!:)

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome...
Did you happen to see my newest post
Wilted Soul... I wrote it in 1968...
Lisa

[Susan 🦋]

I haven’t yet. I will as soon as I get a minute.

[Lisasview]

Oh good, thank you... e all get so crazy busy...

[Taino]

So beautifully written. The imagery brings a flow to the poem that highlights the emotions held within. Please keep writing.

[Susan 🦋]

Oh I am so sorry for the delay in response! Thank you for such a kind review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review! :-)))

[Tate Morgan]

So well crafted and adhered to the rules of rhyme and meter

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review I do appreciate it! Have a wonderful day! :-)

[Tate Morgan]

He "Smiles"

[Nicholas Shea]

Romance at it's finest. You can feel the anticipation, and the pleasure dripping off of every single word. You are one of the most talented poets I've ever met.

[Susan 🦋]

Thanks Nick, but I'm just a beginner!.and you spoil me..but its ok! :-)

[Chris]

hand in hand life's path shared...a good wish, a soft dream.

[Susan 🦋]

That it is :-) Thank you for reading.

[Sami Khalil]

I'm enjoying every piece of art and writing you share with us. Will like to read more soon...;)...

[Susan 🦋]

:-) aw that makes me smile.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....::::)))))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very hot, steamy and romantic poem.
I really liked reading this piece.
I like at the end in brackets you put (because you are skilled) haha
I enjoyed this and the rhyme scheme was great :)
Keep writing :)

[Susan 🦋]

:-) thank you so much for the review! I do appreciate it!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)

[T0TS]

I'm a sucker for love poems, only because I'm Romantic...beautifully woven words from your soul...nicely done.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate you taking the time to do so. :-)

[T0TS]

You are very welcome. :)

[jusstuf]

Oh my friend you express simply beautiful deep feeling of a great passionate love for this man you describe. So much poignancy in the words you use to elicit this wonderful vision of two hearts satisfying the longs of each lover in warmth and safe haven ofk their arms. His passion burns deep for you as you lite the fires he wants to extinguish in the both of you. I could keep going, though I may run out of space. It was the greatest of pleasure to read and review this very hot piece of poetry! So very well written and said. I applaud your most excellent talent my friend!!!