Little bird told me...

love poetry

A Little Bird Told Me

Shall tell, I heard
a little bird
sing sweetly my life's song,
Forthcomings blessed
he did attest,
"For me, love will belong!" 

Life's journey glows,
Good Lord bestows
bright gifts upon my heart.
What hardship brings
gallant soul sings,
 forging our brand-new start.

Then, joy abounds,
delight resounds
of wonder and surprise.
True tender love
(Sent from above)
was little bird's reprise.

Begged, tell me more!
Will he adore
and hold me everyday?
Shall tell, that bird
said not a word,
but winked and flew away.

Author's Note

"Fours 'n Sixes or Quickie" form by Richard © 19 Apr 1987

Reviews

[Zoya]

The very last part, where the bird winks and flies away, you made it look so sweet. I could see that happening in front of my eyes. Such a wonderful poem!

[Susan 🦋]

:-) Thank you for reading and for the sweet review!!!

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[Richard🖌]

Goodness-ME!

What's to say, Susan, when such enthrallment has one's breath in its grasp?
From presentation to flow, as warm and sweet as honey, you've caressed the senses of all who come to read and be blessed by such heavenly wonderment from the depths of your effulgent mind, heart, and soul ... whew, I'm swept!

Your lovely picture choice embraces, the ambiance your words captivate, and ... well, I could write a book on the effects of this one, Dear Lady-Poet.

Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard :)

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Richard...someone a little birdie told me you would like this one!!!....Thanks for the amazing review!!! Gotta love those "effects" :-)...and don't get swept away...

[Richard🖌]

I'm holding onto a limb! ; )

[Susan 🦋]

Good.. silly guy. And if i have too...I'll catch you.. couldn't you just see that? lol...me running trying to catch you! hehe

[Richard🖌]

A smile-worthy vision, indeed! 😃

[Nicholas Shea]

Your words embody so much feeling. I feel that sweet ache.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) That's exactly what I what a reader to do..feel. Thanks again for another review!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it's beautiful and lyrical, Susan. All tied up with a little tug of the heart!

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for the sweet review! I do appreciate it!