Little bird told me...

love poetry

A Little Bird Told Me

Shall tell, I heard
a little bird
sing sweetly my life's song,
Forthcomings blessed
he did attest,
"For me, love will belong!" 

Life's journey glows,
Good Lord bestows
bright gifts upon my heart.
What hardship brings
gallant soul sings,
 forging our brand-new start.

Then, joy abounds,
delight resounds
of wonder and surprise.
True tender love
(Sent from above)
was little bird's reprise.

Begged, tell me more!
Will he adore
and hold me everyday?
Shall tell, that bird
said not a word,
but winked and flew away.

Author's Note

"Fours 'n Sixes or Quickie" form by Richard © 19 Apr 1987

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

That was fun! --- Some birds sing, others sit on your shoulder and whisper secrets. Beware of the secret whisperers, they leave other things behind, well, sometimes they do. And always say "Thank You" to the Mockingbird when he sings, "Pretty, pretty, pretty!

[Susan 🦋]

Aw thank you for reading!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Susan. Those sneaky birds, tempting us sweet words of hope. I liked the complete poem. You made me smile this morning. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Susan 🦋]

You are so sweet! Thank you so much...yes, those sneaky birds! lol...but they are so cute!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Susan. I hope you are doing well and be safe.

[Susan 🦋]

yes, ( so far)...writing a bit more! Hope you are staying safe too :-)

[emmajoy]

' Begged, tell me more! - Will he adore - And hold me everyday? - Shall tell, that bird - Said not a word - But winked and flew away.. '

Such a delightful finishto your poem, ends with a pronounced spring in its step! Your meter danced my thoughts along, feel happy in the wake of your words, Susan. You've turned my okay into a broad smile. Thank you for sharing such finely metered and visual phrases. Happy me. :)

[Susan 🦋]

Aw Emma, Thank you so much for this lovely review! I DO appreciate you stopping by! :-)

[David Klay]

Simply beautiful! This piece has a Dead Poet's style to it that separates it from the ordinary.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you kindly! I appreciate the review!!

[Relic]

Excellent poem and ending, Susan. The diction and pace are top notch. :)))))))))

[Susan 🦋]

Relic! Thank you so much for the review!! I do appreciate it! :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha ... love the turn in closing .. such a romantic uplifting theme ... and then "poof" she's gone .. reminds of of this https://youtu.be/naoknj1ebqI
i like the language ... its kind of classical but very today as well somehow .. nice one Susan!
E.

[Susan 🦋]

:-) So happy you enjoyed this fun liitle piece! THANK YOU!

[Tate Morgan]

Oh this is different so well done I love it

[Susan 🦋]

Hi tater tot ;-p all part of my "little bird series"..glad you enjoyed this. :-)

[Susan 🦋]

..thank you for the review!

[Tate Morgan]

You are welcome SusyQ. All is well in the world today i hope.

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Margie, thank you for yet another wonderful review! This stlye " Quickie or Double down#2" is an original form created by Richard W Jenkins...Master poet, here on this site. Unlimited verses, any topic..4/4/6/4/4/6 aabccb.etc... Check him out..:-)

[barleygirl]

I like the way this message sounds fragmented in short choppy lines, as this would be the sound of a bird imparting its wisdom. Good use of rhyme & imagery to convey your many sensations of good will & hopefulness. In today's gloomy world, a bright uplifting poem like this is a treasure (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Pete]

beautiful, lovely and touching. clever ending. sometimes words are not necessary in love, especially from above. :)

[Susan 🦋]

Thanks Pete...this was part of a "little Bird" series I did. :-)