Your Special Ways

Your Special Ways

A Poem by Susan 🦋
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Kyrielle Sonnet

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My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms
As breathing quickens, welcome boyish charms
Melt into me and set my soul ablaze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


With pleasing sentiments caressing me
Awake sensations, begging to be free
Release forever empty yesterdays
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways


My silent heartbeat, strengthened in your arms
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways.






© 2017 Susan 🦋


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I just love romantic poetry... filed with hope and desire... simply wonderful dearest Susan..
Lisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

This is an old one :-) thanks for reading!
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are quite welcome
Interesting that I came all the way back in your pages and found a poem so similar in subject to th one I just read. Your pen must be pretty hot writing all this urgent heat. Your poetry is special, strong and causes the heart to beat ... not so silently.

This is one of those types of Sonnets I haven't written yet. Looks like the only difference is a aabb rhyme pattern.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan 🦋

1 Year Ago

:) I haven’t looked at this one in quite a while! It’s a interesting form…but the again, I lov.. read more
Very sweet You are a romantic

Posted 7 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

7 Years Ago

Very much so!
enjoyed these wonderful words of affection and what a gorgeous picture to go along with it..

the world needs more of this right now, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways

These words,they could drown a soul completely in a world of ecstasy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

7 Years Ago

well thank you for taking the time to read and send this wonderful review!!! i do appreciate it!
boygene borice

7 Years Ago

welcome :)
Oayk, well it was meant to be constructive in comment. All the best.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this given stanza's quite fascinating, & certainly claiming the longings of one's true-need of love:

Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways

very beautifully penned out. short. simple. and well polished with romanticism. nicely inked!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a sweet review!! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!
'Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways.'

The repeat of that line adds a touch of mystery.. one wonders and smiles!

Fine meter, discreet elegance, beautiful words, blissful intentions. What more can your darling need!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

7 Years Ago

Such a lovely review!! Thank you!

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