Before the Kiss

Before the Kiss

A Poem by Tom

Eyes meet for but a moment, entranced,
Time's relentless pursuit lost in their gaze,
Vulnerable to eternity's dance,
Innocence fades. Natures primitive game,
Tentative fingers of two souls entwine,
Gentle, subtle caresses grace emotions,
A warm summer breeze felt without a sign,
Fanning the flames of the building tensions,
A silent groan from the changing shadows,
Pleasures manifest as tortures so cruel,
Two anxious bodies, trapped like stone statues,
A final stand against loves potent pull,
Violent passions exalt colliding hearts,
Bodies of skin and flesh embrace at last.

© 2012 Tom


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The build-up of passion is palpable here....slow, exquisite torture approaching release. Beautifully done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite erotic...I liked the innocent lead up to the primitive passion 's of the flesh...how we become just that to each other in the height of passion. Very skillfully done!



Posted 12 Years Ago


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Tom

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review, it is much appreciated!

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Added on September 3, 2012
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Tags: Romance, love, anticipation, kiss

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Tom
Tom

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