Fall

Fall

A Poem by Siren
"

a short poem about the season

"
There's a sweet
song
in the air.

It comes around 
when the leaves fall down.

There's a magical
feeling
every-where.

© 2011 Siren


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Siren
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This is short and sweet. It may not have a lot behind it, but it lets me picture Fall and I like that :) Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hi Sorrow,

This is a nice ambient piece; I like it. It doesn't really go anywhere, but far be it from me to offer that observation as criticism, because my own writing is similar in that regard.

I think that ambience which goes nowhere is (mostly) perfectly OK. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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