Sudden Flight

Sudden Flight

A Poem by Siren

and all of a sudden

there were too many people.

i couldn’t breathe.

i couldn’t think.

there was so much noise,

and i desperately wanted to flee. 

© 2013 Siren


Author's Note

Siren
written at the onset of a panic attack. make of it what you will.

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I like the simplicity of this piece. Props to you for writing this during a panic attack...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

heh, thanks... i felt like i was whining when i wrote it, but i really did just want hide away in a.. read more
I've experienced panic and anxiety attacks, sounds about right.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading and commenting. it's appreciated.
Sounds like a panic attack, your words tell it exactly like it is, and for no reason sometimes it comes on and makes us conscious of our breathing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

it's strange how thousands of thoughts can go flying by, but only a few, short ones come through cle.. read more

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Well....if you must know, I (sometimes) live in the real world. I love listening to music because it lets me breathe. I love laughing because it lets me live. I love writing because it lets me (almost.. more..

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