Just Wait

let me

let me cry myself

let me cry myself to sleep

don't you

don't you ever dare

don't you ever dare and weep

i'll be

i'll be fine enough

i'll be fine enough in time

just wait

just wait to read

just wait to read my rhyme

Author's Note

there are day where i wish i could actually cry instead of write things like this. but wishes don't come true for girls like me. all i have are words and dreams.

Reviews

[carol burgess romance]

Your writing is filled with so much pain....I wrote from pain many times but life did turn around and one day I noticed a blue sky and the sun was shining, I stopped seeing everything in bleakness. I began to write of hope....writing is a healer...our wishes don't always come true but lots of times we have to look closer to home to see what is worth seeing and worth living

[Siren]

sometimes a blue sky and a shining sun seem like betrayal. but, that's an idea for another write. yes, most of my writing is painful. most of my life is as well. but there are good things. there are good times. rarely do i completely lose sight of them, but i don't always see them rightly. Writing helps me see a little clearer.

[carol burgess romance]

Well hoping you feel at peace and take delight in the small things

[Siren]

It's all in the little things. :]

[quinfinn]

i think you are too hard on yourself. there are many men out there who would be thrilled to meet and be with a girl like you....and this write is brilliant. it sings to the reader. the repetition gives it life and makes it resonant, well done, Siren!