Tumor

The amount of

hatred

you harbor in your

heart

is absolutely

incredible.

If you had a

tumor

the size of your

hatred

on your

brain,

You would have

died

so very long

ago.

Author's Note

I decided to play around with the format of this. Not sure what the outcome is, so comments on that are appreciated. This was just a thought they told me the other day. I think they were right--they usually are about these things. If I listened to them more often, maybe I would have better poetry. In any case, I would love to know how and what this makes you think or feel.

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

who are them XD, and who ever they are they are right, it's brilliant!

[Siren]

the voices in my head. (and no, I'm not joking. they're a pain.)

[Salar Majak]

They work XD that's what matters most

[Siren]

yup! :D