All On My Sleeve

Fighting tears

Falling fears

Grinding ears

Deafened gears

Confused 

Abused

Used

Fighting fears

Falling fears

Grinding gears

Deafened ears

Author's Note

just...something

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i love the way you turned the phrases around at the end of the first and third stanzas. brilliant and deadly effective. awesome write!

[Siren]

thanks! i was wondering what you might think of that.

[quinfinn]

i love it....well done!