Release

Release

A Poem by Siren

Blood stained hands
No one understands
Bleeding is breathing
Crying is dying
Anger inside
Trying to hide
Eventually 
you 
die.

© 2012 Siren


Author's Note

Siren
took me several tries to come up with something half-way decent. i know it's not much good, but i would still appreciate your thoughts.

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loved the oxmorons.. bleeding is breathing,
crying and dying..it just carries a whole lot of its own message,,,
loved it!!
thanxx for the write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

thanks for your feedback (:
I like it, it leaves you guessing why. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

thanks...
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

you're welcome

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