Understand

Understand

A Poem by Siren

sick and sore
been here before

did the best i can
hope you understand

didn't mean to lie
won't let you watch me die

so i'll live
but i won't forgive

© 2012 Siren


Author's Note

Siren
meh...it's not great, but what thoughts/reactions do you have?

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wow.. simple, precise but heavy with meaning and emotion. I can feel your anger,
great write!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Siren

11 Years Ago

thanks so much! i didn't think it was that great, but your words are quite encouraging
luviva

11 Years Ago

it was actually..!! just believe in your pen
Siren

11 Years Ago

i will try! :D

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