(most) rap isn't poetry

(most) rap isn't poetry

A Poem by surfingdragoncat
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Just playing Devils Advocate. cause i like to mess with all the poets who know it.

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anyone can talk

of the selfish desires

for which the heart mires

I can talk of the way a booty shakes

“make{s} that a*s quake”

Where is the love

True and simple love

People seem to forget

You cannot have the top without the stalk

© 2015 surfingdragoncat


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surfingdragoncat
please take this with a grain of salt. and maybe two.

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i think even with the smile this might portend, there is real substance to the idea that words have to have strong roots to mean something---often they are just words, just to make an impression...but the real impressions run deep...and have strong foundation in feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


surfingdragoncat

8 Years Ago

exactly what I was going for! thankyou

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Added on November 14, 2015
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A Poem by surfingdragoncat