Trials of the Mind Pt 3 (Reflection)A Poem by Justin DThe final installment of this three part seriesThe room leaves no escape, No feelings, but no peace. Few objects strewn around, Only some have meaning. To my right, a rose, Eroding away, softly. To my left, a picture, Of memories forgotten. The lights brighten a bit, Illuminating the shadow. Once, hiding faces, Now illuminating teardrops. No comprehension Of what has happened, What is happening, And what is still to come. Word not needed, Those who fall, Those who carry, And those who run. Each are a piece, Reminders of life. That of fear and humanity, Pride and strength. Slowly looking up, Breathing consciously. Collecting my chaos, Creating your peace. © 2009 Justin DFeatured Review
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1 Review Added on December 9, 2009 AuthorJustin DSomewhere in, OHAboutI am 16 years old and I am new to the writing world. I am writing what I feel at the moment and truthfully I just want feedback. Any truth will do. If you think my writings suck, just say it. I consid.. more..Writing
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