Mystery Of Missing Ships And Planes Solved

Short humorous story about how a boy lost his toy airplane

Any one ever wonder were all the planes and ships that disappeared in the  Bermuda Triangle have gone?

Well I found I out one Christmas Day.  My parents had got me  this really cool aircraft carrier toy that actually launched airplanes off it's deck using catapults just like real Aircraft carrier do.  

    Well during one of my missions to defend the free world from  enemies military forces.  I launched one of my planes off  my deck of my ship  and watched it sore up ward through the air, then went into a barrel roll, then went into a dive and crashed right into the black dark ocean of my mothers hair who was sleeping on the couch in the room I was playing in.

Well I never recovered the down  plane it was declared missing in action. Until a couple of months latter,when my mother ask me to go up to her bed room and retrieve something for her from her dresser.     While search for the object she wanted I found my down naval plane that had gone missing months before. There it was lying at the bottom of one of her dresser drawers.   I rescue the plane and hid it in my bed room.    So do you want my mom's phone number encase a airplane or ship disappears? 

Written by Stephen J. Vattimo 

March 8, 2015

 

Author's Note

Well during one of my missions to defend the free world from enemies military forces. I launched one of my planes off my deck of my ship and watched it sore up ward through the air..

Reviews

[Dillon Flynn]

A cute story, writing from the perspective of an imaginative kid who sees himself as a man on a mission is fun.

The writing, however, is messy. Typos abound ("defend the free world from enemies military forces") as well as some confused usage ("encase" instead of "in case") just to name a few problems. If you feel like your own handle on grammar and usage is a little shaky, I recommend finding a friend who would be willing to look over your writing and help you polish it up.