Looking

Looking

A Poem by surayne716
"

Not done yet.

"

Looking in your eyes,

i see all lies.

You say you want me forever,

but i want so bad to say never.



Looking at our past,

i see we'll never last.

We've cried and died,

each a little more inside.



Looking

© 2008 surayne716


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I love it. It sounds great. It's short, sweet, and to the point. Thank you for posting!! Great writing!!

~Qu33n B Cullen~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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