..YOU WERE MY WORLD..

..YOU WERE MY WORLD..

A Poem by Suranshee

you were my world..

you were my life..

you were my soul..

you were my everything...

 

seasons changed and you changed..

you were no longer mine..

you moved like time moved..

but i was still there..

waiting for you...

 

you became someone else..

but i was only yours..

my eyes just waited..

for you to come and hug me...

 

your's life complete without me..

but mine's incomplete without you..

i'm no body without you..

my life's finished without you...

© 2011 Suranshee


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thnx...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good. A poem I can relate to very deeply. It's short, but packs it's purpose. Very, very good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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