WHY DO U COME IN MY...

WHY DO U COME IN MY DREAMS...
AND MAKE ME THINK..
THAT WE CAN BE TOGETHER...
WHEN I KNOW,IT CANT..

WHY DO U COME IN MY THOUGHTS...
AND MAKE ME THINK..
U LOVE ME...
WHEN I KNOW,IT CANT..

WHY DO U COME IN MY HEART...
AND MAKE ME WANNA..
MAKE U A PART OF MY HEART...
WHEN I KNOW,IT CANT..

WHY DO U COME IN MY LIFE...
AND MAKE ME WANNA..
MAKE U A PART OF  MY LIFE...
WHEN I KNOW,IT CANT..

Reviews

[Vaidehi]

Aww.... praying that it all works out for you... :)

[Suranshee]

thank you for ur suggestions....

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Everyone can relate to this. It's dark and sweet! We love someone, but they let us on and hurt us!

[Aidz]

I agree with the others on the caps, but the U is fine, its an art not school, would have made it more interesting spelling come as cum.... think about it

Good write by the way

[Fabric Pulse]

My suggestion would be to limit yourself on every single word being in caps. Baby your wording, protect it, cherish it, nourish it.

[DeadToTheWorld]

I enjoyed this piece of writing....I'm not much of putting the letter " U " in for " You " but...none the less...it was a good one...thanks for sharing...

[Matthew Kult]

Okay, You are a writer on a writing sight. How hard is it to write out you? Also why in all caps?

Good poem.

Matthew