It Was You For Me..

It Was You For Me..

A Poem by Suranshee

Today i felt something,
somethng that broke me,
broke me so badly,
so badly that i wanted to die..

i came to know
that you were never mine,
you never loved me,
never wanted me..

i was a toy for you
you played with me when you wanted
left me when you had someone.
i was just a toy..an option for you...

i knew we were different,
i knew we had nothing common,
i knew we were not meant for each other,
but still..i loved you...

loving you was not an option for me,
it was not a joke for me,
it was you for me,
the one i loved the most..

© 2022 Suranshee


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wow..........what a great write.i'm mad at your this write......i loved this
i was a toy for you
you played with me when you wanted
left me when you had someone.
i was just a toy..an option for you... ..what nice thinking...and indeedly you;ve expressed here your welll nice thoughts..and real thoughts.......i loved this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow..........what a great write.i'm mad at your this write......i loved this
i was a toy for you
you played with me when you wanted
left me when you had someone.
i was just a toy..an option for you... ..what nice thinking...and indeedly you;ve expressed here your welll nice thoughts..and real thoughts.......i loved this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write! if at all you'r tying to convey a message to someone through this poem then i say,u are successfully in making it intense enough for that person to feel your pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 23, 2013
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Suranshee
Suranshee

chandigarh, India



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