thoughts

your all i have, and your all i want
in some ways we will never be apart
our hearts our conjoined
and our minds snap together
so easily

i really think were ment to be
through all the shining stars in the sky
you were the one that shinned so bright
you were the one that held me tight
and told me everything would be
alright.

we havnt talked in quite some time
but i still feel like your the biggest
part of my life
something you never forget
and i dont think i could ever
forget about you.
it would be like forgetting
how to tie your shoes

after you just tied your
and your friends too
you cant forget what is ment to be
you cant forget what is
always there

so whats so wrong with us?
i know you feel the same
your poetry perfect explains it to
i guess its stubborn people
and there ways

regretting the possiblity of
the on coming pain
it could easily come back
it just takes one mistake for
everything to snap in half.

none of this is new
ive already explained it all to you
now i just reallly have to
make up my mind and choose.
nothings going to stand around
and wait forever

so is it a risk ill be taking
or staying on the safe side
would they both end in happiness
or never ending misery
somethings you never know
till you try
now i just have to find the courage
thats hidden so deep inside.

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

Lovely sentiments expressed here. I like how you have really written from your heart. That takes courage, and is very admirable. This is a great effort. Try to take advantage of spell check though, as there are a lot of spelling errors that detract from the work. Keep writing!