valintines day

im a single cant get my way

im always alone on valintines day

 

no one to actually call my own

it hurts a lot to be alone

 

 

i wish i had someone to love

his lips so soft as he lifts me above

 

his touch so gentle all over the place

his hungry love shows in his face

 

i want a man who will save my life

and i can tell what he wants by the look in his eyes

 

a man who is very unpredictable

and is always kissable

 

but i know a man like that is hard to find

but the thought will always cross my mind

 

no one like that will be with me

so with this thought im wasting energy

 

i deserve so much less

than a man who will love me untill i rest

Reviews

[Hannah_Carter_Luvvs_Yhu..]

You do.. you have Shawn(:

[Shawn Pfister]

A cute poem, it could be improved with some grammar (capitalizing I's and such) and punctuation.