Where have all the cookies gone?

Fiction story of a boy who loved his cookies so much but ate so many it made him very sick. He dream he was in cookie land but his high fever destroyed it. In the end apple man helped him.

Everyday I come home from school, waiting to be eating is my favorite food.  Cooookies in a dish, I can taste them in my mouth as I wish.  Mama always say get a fruit its healthy to eat, yuck yuck yuck, don’t want to taste that in my teeth.  Awww, crunch crunch crunch, as I bite down hard, I did nothing to deserve this treat but its my reward.  Chocolate my favorite cookie of them all, sneaking to my bedroom as I walk through the hall.  You better not have any cookies, mama yelled:  but I’m good at hiding them, I hide them well.  Close my door quick before lil sissy tell,  snitch snitch snitch, if she can sense the smell.  Quickly turn on my TV homework not in my head, just munching on my cookies and relaxing in my bed.  Gotta eat them all so you can’t smell the scent, if mama founds them she’ll give me a consequent.  I stayed up last night too late feeding my face, I made a mess so I had to clean this place.  Mama never seen cookies in my room, I always clean the mess and spray to kill the fumes.  But now I’m too tire my eyes are deep:  I must close them and fall to sleep.  Just a lil nap is all I need, no more cookies no more to feed.  What’s that noise I jumped up quick, my alarm clock, uhhh I’m feeling kind of sick.  OOH no, I slept too long, the cookie scent in my room is very strong.  Gotta do something quick before someone comes in, I can hear footsteps now goosebumps on my skin.  Wait, I thought I had one cookie left on my chest, I guess I ate it let me hurry and clean this mess.  Just in time a knock at my door, got all the crumbs off my floor.  Time to go lil sissy warned, off to school mama blowing the horn.  Time to take a break and eat a snack, mama only put fruit in my backpack.  I rather have cookies instead of fruit, next time I’ll sneak some in the boot.  It’s quiet time the class have to read, yuck yuck stuck in my month an apple seed.  After reading time to go home is near, soon the bell will ring in my ear.  Falling a sleep during reading time, nothing but cookies on my mind.  Am I dreaming what do I see, cookie giants everywhere looking at me.  I must be in cookie land cookies everywhere, creme filling droppings all in my hair.  All I can eat a cookie buffet, anytime I want any time of the day.  Eat all I want eat all day long, cookie land I love my new home.  Uh I feel sick I must lay down, no one to help me in this cookie town.  Open your mouth here take this, no more cookies on our list.  I feel like I’m burning its so hot, the cookies are melting right near my spot.  Take this magic from this spoon,  now rest my child you’ll feel better soon.  The apple man said eat more me, and the woozy hot feeling will flee flee flee.  Wake up my child its time the go, that must been some dream you put on a show.  Where are all the cookies, where is cookie land, I even got magic juice from the apple man.  You were dreaming there’s no such thing, now grab your backpack before the bell ring.  But where are the cookies I wanted more, cookies were everywhere even on the floor.  I got out of my desk and walked out, this had to be a dream there is not doubt.  I went outside and looked around, melted cookie cream all over the ground.  You destroyed cookie land melted creme all over the place, not a cookie in site not even a trace.  What do you mean I did nothing wrong, your fever storm was just too strong.  Oh I did feel woozy and very hot, this dream was unreal so I thought.  Where are you going please stay, don’t leave me along don’t go away.  No more cookies I destroyed them all, where is mama why won’t she call.  My eyes are getting blurry what’s going on, might as well sleep all the cookies are gone.  Wake up my dear a soft voice replied, its mama waking me she’s been right by my side.  No more cookies for you to eat, your cookie days are over no more sweets.  So you were the apple man in my dream, no more cookies and vanilla creme.  So you took the cookie from my chest, I love you mama you’re the best.  Now lay down and get some rest, you have to go to school and retake your test.   ~The End~

Author's Note

Not sure what format to put this story in, but do you think this is a good story for kids? What do you think?