4, 2, 3, Dead

Not really nonsense. Just didn't fit into anything else.

Birth is like a hot coal, the first obstacle,

Living is a fire, cozy until it throws a burning ember,

Old age is like a fall breeze,

Fall turns to winter, and death is an icicle, stabbed into the heart.

Reviews

[Mia]

I like this! Its simple and the methaphors are very clever :)