A love like ours

A love like ours

A Poem by Superawesome09

Love is beautiful,
A love like ours.

It seems perfect,
A love like ours.

To good to be true, 
A love like ours.

Rare and beautiful, 
A love like ours. 

Fake,
A love like ours. 

© 2010 Superawesome09


Author's Note

Superawesome09
Its not much I was just going over my journal and came across the beginning of this and added the rest.

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Wow, its already great. Sometimes you only need a few words to express your feelings....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow i love the impact that so few words can have. I've had a relationship like that, its actually the topic in a few of my poems. True love does exist though. Even if modern culture makes it seem like its unattainable.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 9, 2010
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Superawesome09
Superawesome09

Chicago, IL



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I am 19 years old. My first language was Spanish and once I learned English I fell in love with writing. I found it easier to express myself than through any other method. I love writing in any fo.. more..

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