i deserve to bleed

my blood, it should drip from me like poison.
its burning, screaming to leave me.
i deserve to bleed.
i deserve to be in pain.
to be abused.
to be tossed aside like the worthless waste of space i am.
i do not deserve to live.
but i dont deserve the peace of death.
i dont deserve anything.

Reviews

[Jonathan Failla]

Smart. Astute and healthy.

[emmajoygreen]

Someone who's able to isolate the darkness of such emotions, has the power and ability to create magic. Think, dear lady-girl what beauty you can and could create. The dark can, should - dim, truly, honestly and easily.. if you let the wonders of wondering in. Try it, let me know how wonderful it is.. and very, very soon. Please.

[Brad Dehler]

Strong theme and it presses forward without a doubt. I would push back against these thoughts that swirl in your mind. Propose the opposite; that it shouldnt drip from you, that the blood is life sustaining and should be treasured. Only toxic or poisoned when allowing drugs to enter the system or when left out of the body.
The end... It is good to acknowledge our small existence, yet also true is that you are so valuable. Just some initial thoughts, I hope you aren't offended.