Stay With Me

Stay with me
Breathe in 
Breathe out
You just closed your eyes
The lights are not yet out
Stay with me and remember to breathe 
Things aren't that bad yet you've just forgotten who you are
And you're going through the motions and it's good so far
No one knows how far under you've gotten
And there are time when you feel like your forgotten
Even though you know that those who care are there for you where ever you go 
It doesn't help with how you feel about your life getting so low 
It reminds you that can't give up your life if it changes anothers 
So stay with me and remember I'm here
Stay with me a d don't give up in fear

Reviews

[DeanoSohno]

wow, amazing it really does make you feel while reading great poem

[Kim's Poems]

Such an emotional write, such depth.
Love the rhyme scheme, awesome job!