MEMORIES

Cuddling teddy bear under the blanket
Sound of the rain hitting the rooftop
A melancholy song playing sadly
My eyes shut closed
There,widely opened,my mind is
Welcoming softly the past
As the past came rushing in
I jolted ;opened my eyes
Felt those feelings again
All the first time and the last time
When you caught my wrist
When you kissed my lips
Like you have been waiting the whole time
When you fumbled at my chest
With your mouth like a child
Lying there holding hands
The heat of your skin evaporated
And seeped through my veins
The whole time,everytime
I felt week in my knees
The song you make me listened
Through your headphone
That swept my innocent heart away
By the time I realized it was not a dream
You were already gone
Gone to nowhere
With my innocency
Leaving behind my heart
To shattered to pieces
To become a memory
A memory that tells me
I once felt in love
A love for a lifetime

Reviews

[Gee]

Nice. A few errors here and there but a good Poem on what has gone before. Well done

[aziza]

Thank you Gee for your open opinion....i like it,plizz do the same in your next review or even more specific about my error 😍...thanks

[MandaBear]

I really like the feel of this poem. I feel like this about someone too. Great job!!

[aziza]

Thank you 😊