As perfect as can be

As Perfect as can be
There once was a town just north of West Avenue

“A place like any other” some would say

Yet something about it made it stand out

Maybe it was the strange way they talked

Or the unusual wardrobe

Maybe the wisdom each showed even at young age

Or the peace they maintained during the most tragic times

Even the fondness they showed for an unseen God

But it was the small things that stood out to me

 The things most wouldn’t take interest in 

 

This place was named “Tin Can Alley”

Now these people were quite ordinary

They fought amongst themselves

Yet they always apologized and knew how to forgive

They experienced heartbreak and felt grief

Still not once were they alone

For each comforted one another

And treated each like a beloved sibling

They put each above themselves

Not because of necessity or respect

But willingness to serve and give

They took pleasure when giving

And though they rarely had extra money for extras

They didn’t complain

They seemed content to live their lives as they were

Even the smallest were happy with there present state

They rejoiced when helping someone else

They went stargazing each clear night

Yet felt an awe they couldn’t explain

Followed by a rush of emotion because of the love they felt

From their unseen God

They faced hardships

But instead of giving up

They clung stubbornly onto their faith

And sang bright praises to him

They smiled constantly

And strove to become better people

They had high hopes

Yet they trusted in Gods plan for each

Their houses were always open for strangers

They were always happy

Their hearts ablaze with an inner joy and peace

And though they were simple and meek

 They made a difference in so many peoples lives

 

Now these are the people of Tin Can Alley

Quite ordinary

 Yet at the same time special and unforgettable

Author's Note

on earth i don't think there could be a happier or better place because we are bound to feel grief pain and sorrow and get into fights, face hardships i guess when these things happen we are to make the best of it, apologize, get bak up, and live life best we can

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

This is very lovely..beautiful...I truly enjoyed reading this. I like how the lines flow with each other perfectly and I love your choice of words!

Nicely done

~Suk

[Michael S.]

That's a great place to live and great people to be around. We are in our little society and we can only dream of being in a place as such. Great writing.

[Victory Moskalyuk]

i dont agree all the way. if we put the effort in trying to be better people, others will notice and strive to become like us. we have to make the first step. to strive to make the world a better place.