Just another beating heart

I was bored when I wrote this, but I kinda like it.

there is one thing 

in this world

worth breathing for

and i think that

that reason is love

all we want in life

is to care

and be cared for

now here i sit

alone with this journal

writing down all

the people

who promised they

would always love me

then left

how many

said they would never

leave my side

but now walk

past me in the

halls as if i were

just another beating

heart that wants

to feel something

Reviews

[misha]

This was a great write. I loved the honesty on your side. Keep it up!

[Sunny]

Thanks alot cx

[Jack Wolfe]

past-passed; the emotion you express in this piece is felt by many, the lone soul amongst a crowd; the desolate being who cries out, but instead of an echo, receives silence. I believe this was written as an outpouring, thus I wont go into detail about format and structure, but you're words would come across better if written in a crisp concise manner. I hope this helps some.

[Sunny]

It does, thanks (: