I Cannot Explain...
A Poem by sunlight
Just a sad poem
There once was a sadness deep inside.
It's breath heavy,
A melted cone of sombre lies.
An illness coated, strychnine laced,
Peppercorn- icing, bitter taste.
A darkened breeze ,
A muffled sigh.
A lonely cloaked stare,
Right in the eye.
Oh to hold the sky like that.
To kneel and feel,
And bend the night.
It were empty, bare,
A thousand echoes there.
Inside a dream
Within a dream
I'm crying naked,
Oh , it feels...
Like nothing real.
A shallow, simple, brutal thing.
A million� No s�
The wind could sing.
And answers crumpled
In an empty hand.
My hope floats eternal,
(A Sahara scream)
Loneliness, boundless,
Feathered, bereaved.
( I cannot explain )
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© 2008 sunlight
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great job! i really like this piece, i especially like your word usage, you picked some very unique words to express your feelings!
laceyjane
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 21, 2008
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sunlightcork, Ireland
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im a 31 year old girl,young at heart.I have written a bit of poetry in the past and would like to share it with others to get some feedback. more..
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