Concrete Angles!! Stop the abuse..

You hear screams in the distance

But yet you keep moving on.

You see the wounds,

But yet you keep moving on.

You know what is going on,

But yet you still keep moving on.

The fear is in plain sight
and you see it on that
little face,

But why do you keep moving on
i do not know.

How long,
how long can you go
ignoring that.

Tell me ,
what will it take,
 for you to see it.

Does a life need to  be
taken?

  Before any one see it.

or will it be saved?

That is your choice,
so  choose wisely.

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is really strong writing! great job! its sad to think how many people ignore it when they see it.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Thats strong and provokes not only thoughts, but actions...Great!

[PaperHearts]

This was a really powerful write. You handled a really real and really raw subject in such an elegant and moving way, and I thought that it made for a great piece. The fact that you seemed to address the reader and society directly made the message that you were sending all the more hard-hitting. A strong message and an emotional personal plea. Great work,
~PaperHearts

[Wolf]

this is touching great job

[chillz]

sad.yet nicely written ..great job ^_^

[RTB]

i can see your point of view in this poem i will say alot of people move on because if they ignore the problem then it seems to not exist ignorance is bliss it takes the strong to pay attention to the bad things good write :)

[deeps]

Such a sad write here.

[Dark Empress]

Very sad but a great write

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww this poem is so sad. but it was very well written