You see my eyes but do you see me??

You see my eyes
That light shade of blue.

You see my eyes,
As they look at you.

You see my eyes,
as i cry.

You see my eyes,
as i die.

You see my eyes,
turn from blue to green.

You see my eyes,
but they can really
never be seen.

You see my eyes,
as i walk away.

You see my eyes,
as night turns in to day.

All though you see my eyes
You really do not see me
My eyes are only a fraction
of what you can see.

So take a good look,
look deep inside,
to see more than,
my eyes.

~SK

Author's Note

Pleases leave a comment and hope you like it..

~SK

Reviews

[cfix]

WOW this is just plain wonderful. Such an enjoyable read, love the flow and rhyme scheme as well.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

OH!! I really liked this, because there is more than meets the eye!! great poem!!

[Alice.Valkyrie]

Oh I liked this! The notion of looking beyond the mere physical being, into the depth of one's soul. Great write!

[PaperHearts]

Wow! Interesting write! I really liked the idea behind this poem, and thought that it was executed pretty well. The repetition worked really well in creating the right tone for this piece, with the entire poem being summed up perfectly in the last stanza. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Wolf]

nice write

[RTB]

i did like it it shows a deeper beauty to the soul rather than beauty of physical and seeing pain but actually feeling drawn by the depth of wuts in ur eyes not wuts on them good write

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WONDERFUL!!! this means a lot to me...i feel the same way

[Sugar Plum ♥]

really wonderful style and so nice..

[chillz]

i really enjoyed this read..great write ^_^

[Dark Empress]

You're very talented. I love the feel of this poem. Amazing write. I love it :)