The pain i see.

The pain i see.

A Poem by ♥SunkissAngel♥
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this is about my baby.

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My heart aches for you,
Because you are hurting,
When you smile,
I see it,
In your beautiful eyes,
That pain,
That pain that hurts me every time i see you,
it makes me cry out,
hoping you don't see,
I cover my eyes,
I can't help my self,
but cry for you,
It hurts so much,
That pain you are suffering through,
I see you smile,
But i know you just don't want me to worry,
And i love that,
I love that you care for me,
i love that you will always be there,
for me,
Now it is my turn,
To be there for you,
With every day passing,
You hurt more and more,
I wish there was a thing i could do for you,
I wish that you could see it,
How much your pain is hurting me,
Where is the smile,
Not just on your face but,
In your eyes too,
Where is that person,
I fell in love with,
I now know,
What i can do to help you,
Get rid of that pain,
And that thing is,
Simple but hard at the same time,
All i have to do,
is,
Love you,
And you will slowly begin to,
Heal,
And so will i.

© 2010 ♥SunkissAngel♥


Author's Note

♥SunkissAngel♥
Pleases leave a comment.. thanks...

~SK

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it`s wonderful....i feel every word

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great work!! keep it up ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww, that was a really sweet write. It was heartfelt, emotive, and relatable, and I seemed to believe each and every single word you wrote. There were moments where I thought that you were just repeating yourself, but for the most part, this was a captivating write full of both strength and vulnerability. The last few lines in particular felt uplifting and hopeful. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice write keep it up kiss

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Beautiful written. I can relate to it. Keep up the great work :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow the emotion is definatly there.....great work hun

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thanks so much.. :)

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it i can feel the emotion keep up the good work hun :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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♥SunkissAngel♥

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Bonjour!! Hey every one you may know me but if not my name is samantha but i go by sam, Sunkiss, or Pepper sometimes. I am 15 years old and is currently in a wonderful relation ship. I have two si.. more..

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