Heart Break

How many times do you have to break my heart;
 till you feel better.
How many times;
 will you do this.
I look in your eyes;
and see nothing but disparagement.
I crawl under my covers every night crying for you.
My heart is broken;
and you caused it but i still love you,
and i always will;
no matter how bad you break my heart.   

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

The poem is essentially a teardrop: sweet, salty, simple, and complete. It needs a bit of work, though. Madder should be matter, and disparage should be disparagement (or another word that flows better). If you fine-tune the sentence structures and rework the line breaks, this could be a really stellar poem. Thanks for sharing!

[Sofia N]

this is beautiful, you did a great job writing this..very emotional and deep..I love it :) keep on writing :)

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

thanks...

[Not A Writer]

This sentence made it all

"how many times do you have to break my heart till you feel better."

Good job in communicating your message clearly. I enjoyed this read.