A poetic shamble

The journey through drugs, inspired by a Mozart symphony, ten points if you know which!

Let us be glad!

Loquacious and mad!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Let us be happy!

Gregarious and chatty!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Let us be colourful!

Besotted and wonderful!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Let us be silly!

Foolish and witty!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Let us be serpents!

Wonderful servants!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Let us be forgetful!

Wide eyed and regretful!

Droning in the vain,

droning in the vain.

Reviews

[Seosaimhín]

I really have no idea which symphony, but I'll take a guess. The 9th? I haven't listened to any Beethoven in months.

I particularly love the last stanza. "Let us be forgetful!/Wide eyed and regretful!" describes the feeling, for me at least, of finally coming down from a high.

[Ruth]

I think I am going to like your work a lot love! lol
This is really great wording and has an intense impact!
Not sure which symphony though, indulge? lol
AWESOME work!
xx

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I imagine this being track one on the album I'm making. LOL yet again your work astounds me. Reminds me of Danny "Stills" Stillman from a band named Drop Dead Gorgeous. I also believe it would be just as powerful with music as it would be just spoken word across a coffee table. Your journey is vague, which is what I adore about your poetic onslaught, really we know nothing about you or why you are in Poetic Shambles, but I'm sure there are hints only you know. Anyways sorry for the rant, but it was worth it to me. :)
95/100

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

i like how you repeater droningin vain.

[Geralyn Miller]

Giddy, witty; like champagne served in a goblet of hand hewn rock crystal.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

ahhh~ I could almost imagine it as a rowdy tavern song with a bite of reality to bring merriment down to the bottom with last call~ I can almost hear the symphony which may have inspired but not quite~ very well written!~ much enjoyed!~

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

I'd have a guess that could it be Mozart's 40th Symphony.
I say that because it seems to resemble your poem,
light; melancholic, graceful, bittersweet yet uplifting.
A work of passion, fight and grief. Strength in the face of adversity.
Nicely written. I like to write whilst listening to music.
Sometimes it's instrumental music other times it's rock or punk stuff.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Your writing is different to mine
and I like discovering different types of writing.

[wolfshrew]

this piece of writing definitely came off musically to me even before i read it was inspired by it. i thought it was wonderful and i can't wait to read more from you.

[Robyn]

aw damn i wish i knew what symphony...ill think about it
anyway, nice work with this
i love when writers use music as their inspiration..so many great pieces have come from this

[Talkativeted]

Don't know the symphony but the poem is great. Really glad you decided to share your poems.