reoccurring heartbreak

your hugs were that of asylum jackets

there to restrict more than comfort me

Because you didn't want to love me right

But you also didn't want anyone else to.

Reviews

[Skye]

Its aptly put as a straight jacket! To hold and confine, yet to withhold from you the joy that that confinement could offer turning it into a personal hell.
I don't want you but I don't want anyone else to want you either. Its is awful, painful and frankly doesn't seem to change but for sparingly short moments.

[elle]

a personal hell, indeed. and yes, those short lived happy moments that give a false glimmer of hope.

thank you, skye.

[Skye]

I agree and your welcome

[Davidgeo]

Sounds like a real prick.

I hear people change, though ; )

This is pretty good writing. Well done.

[elle]

maybe they do...maybe i'll see one day.

thank you, dear David.

[Davidgeo]

Everybody does, just not always in a productive way. Sometimes it's a three steps forward two steps back or two steps back and ten steps forward kinda deal. But sometimes even very broken things really do ultimately become fixed things. "all that is ugly can become all that was ugly".

[elle]

excellent point, and i love that quote. only time shall tell!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some people just won't allow the mate to be independent...they must exhibit control...and the more they do that, the more the significant other rebels and withdraws...
j.

[elle]

i think some ppl are naturally possessive when they love...bc they fear the loss. but that can be the cause of the loss. isnt life funny?

thanks for the review

[Laura Kate]

Hi Elle, my first visit to your page today. People can be so selfish in love, so afraid to commit yet unable to let go - so we are left in limbo. Well conveyed
Best ,
Laura

[elle]

limbo is almost worse than heartbreak, in which is what it usually leads to. thank you Laura!

[Laura Kate]

You're right!

[Neville]

If this was not such a bloomin shame, I would say it was luverly..... very much liked and true.. N

[elle]

this means a lot coming from you. thank you.