SMALL FRIEND

This poem was written by my 8-year old grand-daughter. Her pen name is zoeyzoom.

 

Little friend, do you want

Some green tea?  No !

I do not want some

Green tea.  Little friend,

If you do not want

Green tea, do you want

Some blue tea?  No!

I do not want green tea

And blue tea !  Then do you

Want pink tea?  No!

I do not want green tea

And blue and pink !  Then

Do you want orange tea?

No !  I do not want

Green tea and blue

And pink and orange

Tea !  Then do you

Want green steak?

No ! I don't want

Green steak.  I want

You to shut up

And leave me alone

So I can nap ! 

Reviews

[Casey Dusek]

This was very cute :D I enjoyed it. You're grand daughter style is similar to Dr. Suess, ( Would you like green eggs and ham? No I would not like green eggs and ham! ) Encourage her to keep writing! :)

P.S. The structure is a little off:

Little friend, do you want
Some green tea? No !
I do not want some
Green tea. Little friend,
If you do not want
Green tea, do you want

It would proably be easier to read if it went like this:
Little friend,
Do you want some green tea?
No ! I do not want some green tea.
Little friend,
If you do not want green tea, do you want... etc.